"when wild wild wet,wif 7 ppl.Jianfang,eleanor,siti,kelvin beh,mariam,shengyang,sandra.it was veri fun.firstly we go shoik pool den rite we dun need to take the tube anyhow swim also got tube.den duno why rite eleanor suddenly siao siao pour water at me den push down my hair.den i make back to all the girl except mariam n sandra.who noes she hurt her head while escaping.

Suddenly,kelvin beh n eleanor glass drop becos it was at siti dere n when capsize, she didnt noe dat the glass drop.after some searching eleanor glasses was found but not kelvin.haiz den some go lost n found n check while i n kelvin kept on looking.

After that we when to eat,i eat pizza loh so lucky man left last chicken pizza.duno why the wild wild wet pizza so desprate de lor.Pppl is too much pizza for sale.the pizza dere is sell until out of stock.den again eleanor dam extra lor sit wif the boys.we talk about randal but cannot tell it is highly confidential.

we proceed to the shoik pool again den we was relaxing after dat i keep bully ppl like kelvin eleanor n siti.i was kind of happy when i crush eleanor hands n i force her to say i love randal.But she call siti n kelvin for help.they 3 come n strip my short but was to slow in action so in the end i manage to get away.

After dat we had alot of fun at the yakult pool n tsunami.all of us are kind of crazy espically siti keep on make me wif her rubber band. "

I think his is more detailed. Mind the tenses and sort. LOL. Here's mine.

, osn.

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